Our Tabletop, Deck Building Survival Horror RPG
  • Devidise
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    Our Tabletop, Deck Building Survival Horror RPG

    by Devidise » Sun Jul 14, 2013 4:34 pm

    "Who Among Us" is a table top, deck building, horror themed RPG. We aren't looking for a very high start up, but I'd still like to get the word out there. I am aware of the somewhat low quality of our video, but I wanted to get as much information out with our current budget in mind.

    http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/dev ... o-among-us


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    Re: Our Tabletop, Deck Building Survival Horror RPG

    by VaporStarter » Sun Jul 14, 2013 9:18 pm

    Devidise wrote:"Who Among Us" is a table top, deck building, horror themed RPG. We aren't looking for a very high start up, but I'd still like to get the word out there. I am aware of the somewhat low quality of our video, but I wanted to get as much information out with our current budget in mind.
    http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/dev ... o-among-us


    Hi Devidise. I think your game concept has promise, but I agree your offering feels very rushed. I think you would benefit by taking a big breath, stepping back, and trying to refine your presentation. Have you vetted your game idea on BGG? Are you a member of a local game board meetup, which you've pitched this concept to? Do you have video of what they might have to say about the idea?

    I find your rewards confusing. It's hard for me to find which one to use for "the game", as I'm struck with a string of booster packs all set at $5. I'd say have one $5 reward, that gives user choice of one booster pack. Then you can have $10, with choice of two booster packs, etc.
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