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[qboxmonthly]

I recently launched a kickstarter campaign to help fund my passion of a Spy themed monthly box subscription service called Qbox. Why Qbox? Did you ever play spy when you were a kid and dream about all the wonderful gadgets and gear of a master spy? Why stop dreaming, with Qbox you get a killer box equipped with epic gadgets, gear and clothing complied into a killer box delivered to your safe house monthly. The box also comes with a predetermined mission so you can test your skills in the field, report your results via social media and next month receive a new box, new mission and new gadgets.

Please help promote our concept, and share our passion for espionage.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/66 ... master-spy

Thanks, and remember "always have an escape plan".

Brian Lloyd
http://qboxmonthly.com

[hyperstarter]

Hi I sent you a reply to your email the other day but didn't hear back from you.

Regarding the page, my thoughts were:
- Just a quick comment, the knife reference isn't that good and I'm pretty sure wouldn't be allowed in parts of the world so I think you should remove it. The guy holding the gun makes me worried too.
- Is this targeted to adults or kids? I think should cater to both.
- Also, your campaign needs more photos and things people can relate too. It's a great idea, but perhaps seeing images of what the monthly tasks would be would help alot.

[qboxmonthly]

Awesome feedback, thanks for taking a look and providing feedback I'll work the updates and changes to my campaign. Keep it coming, really love the tips and support.

Thanks.

[hyperstarter]

Sure. Were you going to email me back a direct reply to my email though?

[rorabaughdesigns]

I agree with @hyperstarter. You really need more images. Sad as it sounds, people tend to scan rather than read.

[hyperstarter]

Thanks for backing me up You actually wrote to me a couple of moments ago via GiftsandCoups so I just replied to you there.

Hope the Qbox takes off, but does need ALOT of work.

[qboxmonthly]

Thanks for the feedback, I've incorporated more photos and changed some things around to make to more visual. I'm certainly a novice at crowd funding techniques and love the feedback and guidance, thanks to all for the support.

Please share our genius and help promote our concept, with a successful crowd funding campaign I'm confidence Qbox can take off and control a vast section of the subscription box industry. Thanks again.

Brian

[hyperstarter]

Cool! So you won't be replying to my email? I was waiting around for it as you wrote to me first