Best thong for active women
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    Best thong for active women

    by MinimalApparel » Tue Feb 02, 2016 11:43 pm

    Hi guys!

    My husband and I just launched our first Kickstarter campaign: THE SYNERGY thong.

    The Synergy is a seamless thong constructed with the highest quality and most comfortable fabrics on the market.
    If you have a chance, please check our campaign and share with your family and friends.
    our website is: www.minimalapparel.com
    and our campaign link is: http://bit.ly/synergythong

    Carolina


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    Re: Best thong for active women

    by hyperstarter » Wed Feb 03, 2016 4:03 am

    Could you post the full kickstarter url as some of us can't see the bit.ly link.
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    Re: Best thong for active women

    by MinimalApparel » Wed Feb 03, 2016 4:41 am

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    Re: Best thong for active women

    by hyperstarter » Wed Feb 03, 2016 6:24 am

    Hi, I took a look at the campaign and have some comments for you.

    I can see you've raised about 15% and still have some time to go, so that's ok.

    My initial impression is that it's too sexy. It's designed for women, but the campaign looks like it's aimed at men :)

    I think there's a difference in the quality of the photos. The photos of the model look very high quality, but the photos of the thongs laid out on the white background look a bit dull and it think it's difficult to tell what they look like without them being worn.

    I also would of liked to of seen other women wearing the thong, perhaps as a group - that way the viewer can gage different body sizes.

    Can the thong be used on the beach, in the water, on a boat? Having photos of the model wearing it in these locations would help too.

    What I'd do is is take photos of the thong worn by a shop dummy. That way customers can't get distracted by a hot looking woman and focus on qualities such as the material, colours and ultimately if they can wear it.

    I don't remember seeing a size chart, I think it's important.

    Also bullet points of what makes your thongs better than those from the regular high street I think are needed. The video and sexy model have probably helped to get you backers, but in tern it may of diswayed potential customers who were more focused on how it would fit them.

    Another thing is who you've reached out to? What did they say?

    If you need further help with your campaign let me know and I can give you some further ideas on how to progress your campaign. All the best!
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    Re: Best thong for active women

    by MinimalApparel » Wed Feb 03, 2016 7:30 am

    Hi Hypestarter,

    Thanks for your comment we took all of your feedback in and actually made some updates to our campaign. We added a couple of product pictures and also a sizing chart.

    Thank you,

    Zack and Carolina
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    Re: Best thong for active women

    by hyperstarter » Wed Feb 03, 2016 7:34 am

    Sounds good. As mentioned if you'd like to get in touch - feel free to PM me on the forum or perhaps email@hyperstarter.com

    We've some good testimonials on this forum already at:
    recommend-using-hyperstarter-t6127.html

    - I'd probably suggest looking at which influencers (based on your competitors) could write about you :)
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