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[keikowong]

Hi! My name is Keiko!
I just launched my first campaign and would love some feedbacks to improve it!
It is a Japanese style Love Simulation Android Game with health and fitness features! What's special and unique about this game is that your progress is determined by how active you are in real life!

My Campaign link:
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ke ... -simulatio

Since this is a fitness game, I wonder where can I find some journalists who focus on fitness and games to have a review on it +_+

Currently the social media I am using for the campaign: Twitter , FB, Reddit and my own game review website. I would like more suggestions!

Thank you in advance for any suggestions! ^^

[giftsandcoupons]

Sounds different! Is there any chance the graphics can be greatly improved?

[keikowong]

Hi thank you for your reply and yes the graphic will be further develop if the project is successfully funded, there will be another illustrator who is experience in Chibi style drawing help us to re-make the girl and the GUI. However she will only help us once the project is successfully funded when we can offer her a small budget to work for it, So at the moment, the kickstarter campaign's graphic will stay as it is now ><

Will you say the kickstarter graphic's standard pushes you away atm? +_+

[giftsandcoupons]

Yep to be honest, I'd have to say the quality of the graphics at the moment puts me off...she couldn't design better ones and put her watermark over them? There's no animations either? Just a photo flip once the walks reach a certain point?

I guess the app needs to be left on for it to calculate steps...so does it use alot of processing power as battery life is short. Where is data held? Is it secure? This app is pretty similar to yours too:
http://codecanyon.net/item/walk-app-m7- ... ds/7369801

[keikowong]

Hi and thanks giftsandcoupons ! Okay, I didn't expect the graphic would puts people off although it is not that great at the moment. Asking her to make me a new girl will request works, and it is hard to ask her to work for free =( But I will try +_+

As the kickstarter's graphics are to explain the idea better, it is not the actual game. There will be love dating simulation novel style stories once the walks reach a certain point, but they will be mainly text and still images, not animation. The more you walk, the more chapters and characters you will unlock!

It won't be a step counting tool, it needs to be left on to calculate steps, but think of it this way, instead pressing buttons, you needs to walks to play this game. The data will hold on your mobile's storage like most of the offline game!