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Mando1983 · by **Mando1983** » Sat May 02, 2015 2:04 am

My project went live about a week ago and I used a crowdfunding service to promote it but I have seen no results. If you can take a couple of minutes to look at my project and tell me what I could do to make it better. If you dont like my project your feedback is also welcomed. Thank you for your time.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/14 ... e-nor-hell

Cristina · by **Cristina** » Sat May 02, 2015 9:22 am

This post has been moved to the Kickstarter and Crowdfunding Questions Only (Strict) section.

Charles · by **Charles** » Sat May 02, 2015 9:48 am

Mando1983 wrote:My project went live about a week ago and I used a crowdfunding service to promote it but I have seen no results. If you can take a couple of minutes to look at my project and tell me what I could do to make it better. If you dont like my project your feedback is also welcomed. Thank you for your time.

You have a project video, which is good. It's a good quality video. You do well enough on explaining, in your video.

But, there's a difference in explaining something and in persuading people to support your project.

Your project page, overall, is visually deficient. No photos. No art. No visual impact.

Your funding goal is eighteen thousand dollars. That's a lot of money, even for a book project. You are facing a hard sell.

Clicking on the "Share this project" button/link yields a total of just 1 Facebook share.

You didn't bother to connect your personal Facebook page to your Kickstarter.

You have a typo in your project name. Heave, instead of Heaven.

It doesn't require $18,000 to do what you are proposing to do. Perhaps you should reconsider the scale of what you are trying to accomplish. How many copies do you propose to print?

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