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[coolinvent]

We launch tomorrow. Any comments or suggestions on what we could do better?

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/versi/548730247?token=42f632a8

[johnnie smith]

Awesome design, Dale!

The video may get some tweak. It shows only the concept. Does not mention the rewards (same applies to the page in general, at bottom). Video Is short enough so you have ample time to elaborate and enhance it. Average video time for successful projects is 4 minutes (umm, 3:57)

Good luck!

[hogeandco]

Interesting product.

The first thing that stands out is the photos. I would HIGHLY recommend retaking them. They are quite grainy. High quality photos do wonders for campaigns.

Also, make sure you scale and size them properly so that do not get distorted when you upload them to kickstarter. I noticed a few of your shots got stretched out a bit.

I don't watch Kickstarter videos. So for people like me, make sure you put everything in the campaign page that you put in the video. And tell your story as best as you can with pictures. Being able to just scroll down the page and hop from picture to picture to get an understanding of the campaign is very valuable. A picture can be worth 1000 words, literally.

I think you should also include some pictures with the light off and in an appropriate scene. So like have it mounted on a wall in a room with people in the room. Show it in its natural environment.

Lastly, don't be in a rush to start up a campaign. The pre-campaign is really what can make or break the whole thing,

-Greg

[coolinvent]

I'm not seeing that the images are grainy, but thanks for the comments. The light is on a wall and shows off at its best I think.

[osxEmma]

Good luck!!!

[Eyello]

Looks interesting, I like things which are manufactured from materials like that!

[Joshj84]

Interesting product and goodluck!