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[Valiterra0014]

Hi everyone. I just launched my project and was hoping you could take a look at it and give me any feedback.

Thank you

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/52 ... ing-cards/

[Charles]

My immediate impression, upon your project page loading was that the project image was very engaging to the eye.

The video, I only watched a portion of. At first, I thought that it had no audio. Then, the narrator speaks with too hushed a voice. I watched a few cards get flipped over, but found the video more annoying, than anything else. The still images, though, those look very nice, I think. They are colorful and visually interesting.

I think that this will sell, if you get people to visit your page.

[JayRM]

The art looks great, and I like how you touch on each card. I don't really like the video all that much as there are times that I could not understand the narrator. I get the vibe you're trying to create, but you may want to redo the sound. Maybe you should redo the whole video so that it's more engaging to a wider audience range. Also, I'm curious as to what you need the 7k for. Based on all of the art and the video, it seems that all you are looking for is money to place an order, is that right? Perhaps you should reword the Risks section by being more specific. Also, maybe you should advertise on Faceboook to get more exposure. Keep pluggin' a way! Good luck!

[Bojankacarski]

Hello my advice would be if you list what the money will be spend exactly for how many decks you are going to make where are you going to sell them do you have any buyers and so plus making some upgrades maybe on the campaign page