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[carmorhcp]

I will be going on the road with the band Less Is More to shoot a documentary of their adventure.
They are releasing their first album Amid The Flowers on Aug 22 and will be hitting the road shortly after. Please give their music a listen and share around our kickstarter campaign if you like the music and want to see more of this lovely duo!

Also please leave any advice or comments so the kickstarter can be as amazing as possible.

Much love and best of luck to all of you.

Kickstarter: http://goo.gl/fvTcCz
Website: http://lessismoreband.com/
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/TheLessIsMore

[Charles]

The $5 pledge level is a good level, I think. It's use of "all of the above" incorporated with it sounds fine and dandy, but all that portion of that pledge level is is a thank you note. It isn't a critical issue, just something that caught my eye.

Your project page is lacking in visual energy. This is a band. You don't have to have art, to create visual energy, to engage the page visitor in a visual manner. Use photographs to achieve the same effect. You can kill two birds with one stone, if you do, by using photographs to break the large mass of text into pieces, That way, the text becomes more inviting, and less intimidating, to read.