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frankdlc222 · by **frankdlc222** » Fri Apr 25, 2014 7:58 pm

Hi everyone,

I have been working on a Kickstarter champagne for my project the CroClip. I have gotten good reviews from friends and family but I was hoping to get some input from you guys. I have been browsing the forums and seen a ton of amazing pointers and tips and look forward to seeing what you guys have to say. Thanks!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1427503326/97635087?token=9c14d1ba

Frank Delacruz
http://www.croclip.com/
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1427503326/97635087?token=9c14d1ba

therriaultk · by **therriaultk** » Sat Apr 26, 2014 2:41 am

Hi,
CroClip looks like a high quality product that has a market, and your video shows how practical and easy to use it is. The only suggestion I would make is that the video uses just words and visuals to introduce the product with background music until the end and I felt like more dialogue or something could be used to grab people's attention? Aside from that this looks like a promising campaign, good luck!

frankdlc222 · by **frankdlc222** » Wed Apr 30, 2014 2:30 pm

Thanks therriaultk for the input! I agree. The video does need more dialogue. I am going to rework the video to better grab peoples attention in the beginning.

Frank Delacruz
http://www.croclip.com/
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1427503326/97635087?token=9c14d1ba

sbriggman · by **sbriggman** » Wed Apr 30, 2014 9:59 pm

Hi Frank. I would consider adding one more upper level tier above $30. The t-shirt is okay, but if one of it's key uses is as a workout product, wouldn't it make more sense to include some kind of workout shirt?

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