@nikkitee - Some friendly feedback/thoughts. Keep in mind, this is just my first impression after seeing your Kickstarter. Would recommend getting second opinions.
In your video, you explain what you are looking to do (make a song) and what you need (stylist/money/camera work). Towards the end you mention your youtube and the purpose of the project. If I knew you personally, I think this would be an okay pitch. However, you are one in thousands of other creators competing for attention.
I would recommend treating the video sort of like a job interview or a pitch to investors. You didn't seem all that enthusiastic or prepared (Just my perception). I would provide better context towards the beginning of the video as to who you are, why you are awesome, why this project is awesome (why you should be a part of it), and only after discuss where the money will go to and what you will need.
Have you considered including any images in your campaign text? You also don't mention your youtube in the campaign text for someone who wants access to your previous work but didn't watch the video.
@Dan277 - Two other good articles are:
http://www.crowdcrux.com/30-people-to-p ... n-twitter/http://www.crowdcrux.com/23-places-face ... indiegogo/
