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[iaak1983]

Hey everyone I am Iskander. This is my kickstarter so far please review rate love and slander. https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/17 ... n=e29864ee on monday the third i will make it live after doing all the final edditing i would love oppinions on telling the story better and grammar and what you think of my project. Also any advice on where and how to promote it when i make it live would be much appritiated. I might put a vid up i was considering it but i havent really spoken in a few weeks and i recont i could probably muster up right now is a weird sounding hi, or i was thinking of putting one up with me flicking a few bits of paper with a few greetings on there. But for now if i can have your help in editing the literature or even leaving it as is if you think the message gets across.

[sbriggman]

1. Break up the blocks of text. It's very difficult to read.
See: http://www.crowdcrux.com/copywriting-ti ... ter-pitch/

2. Definitely include a video. Some stats show it increases your chance of success by over 60%

3. On promotion, see the "marketing and promotion" section of this page: http://www.crowdcrux.com/best-crowdfunding-articles/

[iaak1983]

ok thanks ive uploaded a vid now my problem is im not a speaker or a video guys so i done a scrapbook theme but i will also look to add in some pics of potential locations over the weekend