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[akfilmmaker]

Hey guys,

My name is Adeel Kazim and I am an independent filmmaker from Toronto and this is my first Kickstarter project (hopefully not my last).

"Deuce" is meant to show my appreciation for the classic sports film. It is meant to pay homage to the films that have inspired us and showed us what it takes to be the best that you can be.

Here is the link:

http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/adeelkazim/deuce-a-short-film-about-becoming-a-pro-tennis-pla

I would love for some input and hopefully I can answer any questions you guys may have.

If you like what you see, feel free to back my project

[sbriggman]

Feedback:
- Would ask your family and friends or cast members to pledge to get it up from 0 backers first.
- Would include more information about cast members in your campaign page
- Don't feel sold on the story from the footage. It just looks like two guys playing tennis at that one part. Would make it more movie-trailer like, maybe with VO, or at least a bit more info about the conflicts the character will face.