I saw your previous post so thought would review yours. It doesn't look too bad, the video started off slow but the point of having smokeless cooking makes a lot of sense and should be the main selling point/clearer on your page.
The pizza in the demo didn't look too great and ideally you need to show off why this is better than other mini-ovens on the market, as I couldn't see what makes yours so special.
I think you should restart the campaign, as you're no where near the goal. My suggestion is to make demos comparing your food with other food, get people to try it and then sign them up if they prefer yours.
Collect many emails and then restart with a realistic target. I wrote a quick guide on this if useful at:
http://www.linkedin.com/pulse/how-colle ... giles-daweBest of luck!
