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[GiO (1998)]

Hello everyone, I am Arnau, CEO of GiO (1998). We are an emergent clothes brand with more than 150 products and 6 different collections for you to Choose Your Style.
We have been working to start a Kickstarter campaign in order to help this brand go further and we would love your support. Right now the Kickstarter campaign is not 100% completed but we are facilitating a link for you to watch it on preview --> https://giovisuals.wordpress.com/ Here you can go to the project and also subscribe into our mailing list to keep notified when the campaign launches

Thank you for your time, have a good week.

[hyperstarter]

Here's the direct link btw: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/gi ... n=319c497c

I think midway down the page, the campaign looks pretty decent - but the top images and the images in the video look pretty poorly photoshopped so you might want to fix that.

Will you be doing another video as 45 secs isn't much. Best of luck with it.

[GiO (1998)]

Here's the direct link btw: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/gi ... n=319c497c

I think midway down the page, the campaign looks pretty decent - but the top images and the images in the video look pretty poorly photoshopped so you might want to fix that.

Will you be doing another video as 45 secs isn't much. Best of luck with it.

Thank you for your advice! We will improve it but the video will probably be this one, because we want people to focus more on watching the website that we have created rather than a video. We think it is better for the people to experience it by themselves. Also it is not so common to have a solid website developed in a Kickstarter campaign.

[ohbugi]

I love the human element photography at the bottom but the GIFs at the top look poorly designed. Theres also far too much text. For some reason my brain automatically skims blocks of text. Try to segment each section into two sentence paragraphs. For the stretch goals make it more illustrative for example piles of clothes in your brand's color palette with arrows pointing at each milestone?