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Seeking feedback on our campaign

Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2017 10:59 am
by benmcwilliams
Hi all,

I'm new to this forum and have spent a bit of time looking at the free resources that have been provided on here, I have to say I wish came to this forum pre launch to our Kickstarter campaign.

Our Kickstarter campaign for our Augmented Reality Toys - SwapBots is now live on Kickstarter. I would appreciate your thoughts and feedback on our campaign. https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/swapbots/swapbots-the-augmented-reality-toy-and-video-game

Ben

Re: Seeking feedback on our campaign

Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2017 2:40 pm
by hyperstarter
Welcome! We spoke last month, you sent me your Press Release but then no follow-up from you afterwards which was a bit disappointing...so I'd probably suggest you market yourself better on there.

In term of the campaign, it looks ok. It's a bit too "in your face" with colours as well as some initial confusion as to what Swapbots does if you don't click the video links. What do your Google stats show you, how long are people on the page for? Perhaps you could work out the amount of time they're on there and what can be improved (like compressing images, removing big files etc.,)

Also feels like you need alot more text + social media link ups too.

Hope this helps.

Re: Seeking feedback on our campaign

Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 7:33 am
by lowkey
educate your audience about your product. good luck.

educate.

educate.

educate.

Re: Seeking feedback on our campaign

Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2017 9:27 pm
by AJAeroasis
Hey there!
I saw your project a week or two ago when we first launched our Kickstarter Campaign. Very cool to see you got funded!
I can see how people would say it's a bit in your face, but after all ... it is a game! I don't think this varies too much from your traditional game release. I think the video is very professional. I agree that a bit more text would be helpful, as some people are detailed oriented and want to know more before putting money into something. All in all, in my opinion, great project, great video, and great Kickstarter page!

Re: Seeking feedback on our campaign

Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2017 2:09 pm
by Wheres Funky Monkey
Hey..Probably abit late seeming as you've got funded so you've done something right...Good luck in future!

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Re: Seeking feedback on our campaign

Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2017 6:58 am
by MPFDesigns
wow this project looks amazing wish i had known about it sooner!