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Before making product photos and video, we'd like to get feedback on the KS page so far:

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/santa-monica/1517121823?token=b5a68bdc

I don't really understand what you're offering actually. I'm looking at the images, they look like stock images. Are you selling a product - if so, what does it look like?

There's big bunches of text and then images, I think make the layout a bit better and use some professional looking illustrations and photos.

No need to give outside links, just break it up and make it simple.

It's not finished yet, so the main pic is a sort of stock image. The idea is that the lady is enjoying the aroma coming out of the product.

Once the physical product is in almost-final consumer form, I'll put pics up. Right now they are operating here, but are opened up and laid to to make them easy to access.

I'll slowing be adding more photo, and simple info-graphics, and gif's, but I'm having trouble finding out to make animated graphics that show flow, and growth, etc.

Firstly have you reached out to Kickstarter on feedback?

You have way too much text!

When are you looking to launch?

Ok I just separated the top "basic" section from the "details" section further below it. I've already moved a lot of the text to our forum, and have only the simple details on KS.

The product is not really for impulse buyers who don't read; it's for people really interested or involved in one of the described topics. I think it looks like lots of text because the pics are not in place yet.

I did just send it to KS and they wanted product pics first.

Launch is unknown yet, since we are finalizing the product. Probably April.

Ok great makes sense, best of luck!

I don't understand either

Understand what?

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Hi
it's look interesting
Rgds
Greg