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First project. Tell me what you think! (mobile game)

Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2015 2:33 am
by JAWagner
First one ever. Planned it out over several days, so please let me know what you think of it.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/17 ... matory-bot

Thanks!

Re: First project. Tell me what you think! (mobile game)

Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2015 7:32 am
by JAWagner
I'd still like to know what you guys think. Anything at all is helpful.

Re: First project. Tell me what you think! (mobile game)

Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2015 2:19 pm
by JayAbundez
It looks extremely challenging HAHA how many downlods hs it recieved so far ??

Re: First project. Tell me what you think! (mobile game)

Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2015 1:42 am
by Mobileguy
Looks pretty sweet man. Glad to see you have been successfully funded! May I ask how you drove traffic to your campaign?

Re: First project. Tell me what you think! (mobile game)

Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2015 2:07 am
by Bob_iDGi
Pretty good for a first attempt. Just need to drive a bit of traffic to make that last hundred or so dollars. Have you tried posting to Reddit to get some attention?

Re: First project. Tell me what you think! (mobile game)

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:18 pm
by ZompireWolf
Looks pretty good! I'm finding that mobile games aren't as backed or promoted as console games. Nature of it I guess.


I like that your showing the gameplay but your video doesn't have any voiceover, music or explanation about you or what you want to do with the game once your finished building it. Is it free? Why am I paying $1 if it's free? Is there ads? Will my $1 get me the game ad free? I know you know this game inside out but as a first time viewer... I don't have a clue!

I'm giving you this feedback as I'm pretty sure you'll be back with a bigger and better game after this is released and you may need to have a bit more explanation in your video. It may be the best game in the world but wrap it up nicely and tie a ribbon around it! Best of luck!

Re: First project. Tell me what you think! (mobile game)

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 2:35 pm
by smokoinc
pretty neat, well done :)