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Hey Kickstarter Forum,

We launched our Kickstarter campaign on Wednesday and could really use feedback with the layout and content of our campaign page. http://kck.st/1rFYkYF

We'd spent many weeks sending it out to friends and family for feedback but wonder if they were just being kind with their comments. Please be brutally honest as we are now underway and want to ensure we get it perfect... or as near as perfect as possible!

Our campaign is to help raise awareness and ultimately fund the remaining development cost of a much needed solution to reduce the number of vehicle accidents (1.5 million per year in the USA) caused by the use of hand held mobile devices when behind the wheel.

Hopefully none of you are reading this while driving!

Many thanks in advance for your feedback and support.

Andrew
The Smart Dash
http://www.thesmartdash.com
Kickstarter campaign link: http://kck.st/1rFYkYF

As a professional web marketer and developer I can say that your Kickstarter page is really well designed in my opinion. lots of images to help guide the eye through the content quickly, easily, and naturally. It passed the 3 second test (look at a page for 3 seconds, can you tell what it's about?)

Looks good, congratulations.

Thank you kindly Kickstarter.Reviews!

Yes. Very nice. Perhaps you can add to the FAQ what kind of info you display from the OBD in more detail.

I think its all great, except for your tables. They could use a bit more space, and a little graphical flare. But that's just a small detail, overall your page is well presented and clear.

This is one of the most professional kickstarters I've seen. The video sounds like it's already a TV ready commercial. The layout of the KS is very well done. This can save many lives, hope it gets funded!

From a person with very little knowledge about what a good layout/web design is, your kickstarter page looks just fine to me! The video you guys created was very professional looking!

Good Luck!

I think your page look great and I feel the same way about friends and family. My kickstarter page is fairly simple and I am only trying to raise a small amount of money, but I still feel like they went easy on me.