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Your advice is strongly needed
Posted: Sat May 30, 2015 4:24 am
by ledshotrod
Hi, we would greatly appreciate your feedback and analysis of our project, the "L.E.D Shot Rod"
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/led-shot-rod/led-shot-rod-shot-glass-holder-rack-display that isn't really kick-starting like we had hoped. What should be changed? Where is our mistake(s)? we are a humble crew and ready to make the right changes in order to make it happen. Please let us know your insights. Why would you back or not back this project?
Your honesty is much appreciated.
We would also appreciate any promotion and awareness you could bring to this project.
For more details please visit
http://www.ledshotrod.comrespectively,
The L.E.D Shot Rod
Re: Your advice is strongly needed
Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 2:14 am
by Orkyd
your video should go straight to the point, the intro is too long and the whole video is too long, the 45 sec video below the page would be ok
you are talking to a niche, so you have to find your backers where they are, it seems not a lot on kickstarter
Re: Your advice is strongly needed
Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 9:27 am
by Cristina
This post has been moved to the Kickstarter and Crowdfunding Questions Only (Strict) section.
Re: Your advice is strongly needed
Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 4:02 pm
by carboLab
Hi,
I'm no expert and this is just my opinion but I think the introduction with the letter effects are too long and too many.
You could start by one or two full screen texts/logo but not more.
You display the Kickstarter logo, but the audience is already on Kickstarter so they know you are here
You can delete this.
I think you should also show more the product and start by explaining what it is, and how it works. Then you can put your night clubs scenes to demonstrate how it looks in the reality !
I hope it helps you
Re: Your advice is strongly needed
Posted: Sun May 31, 2015 7:34 pm
by kongoriver
Hi!
I agree with the feedback above. I would also love to here the story behind the project. I think a personal touch can make all the difference.
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Little Book of Disorders
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/11 ... -disorders
Re: Your advice is strongly needed
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 5:23 pm
by babyshoesmovie
It will be very hard to sell anything that involves alcohol because it is advertising irresponsible drinking. You're video could do with trimming down, it needs to be more to-the-point. But as I say, advertising anything that involves drinking will be hard.
Re: Your advice is strongly needed
Posted: Mon Jun 01, 2015 5:54 pm
by fullspiritedflavours
I agree video is too long.
But utilize Facebook ads and reach out to people who are influential on Twitter and Facebook