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so its live and not doing so good

Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2014 10:04 am
by iaak1983
hey guys my campaigne is live and not doing so good any tips and advice on what i can do to help it grow?

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/17 ... takes-a-qu

Re: so its live and not doing so good

Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2014 5:49 pm
by sbriggman
1. Generally, I see 20-30% of pledges initially come from an individual's personal/professional network and friends/family. You need to jumpstart the funding process.

2. Correct your grammar/punctuation errors. "There is a place i know " Need a capital "I" in many sentences.

3. Break up your long paragraphs of text with headlines like: "Where will the funds go?" "Who am I?" "Why should you pledge?" See: http://www.crowdcrux.com/copywriting-ti ... ter-pitch/


"What i found when i was at my illest was that being alone in the house i craved continuity the comfort of being able to look at something interesting and it being familiar, involving and entertaining. For example a day in placa de catalunya, Barcelona waiting as it fills with tourists and for 12 hours is a filled with people from all walks of life. "

I would really recommend putting yourself in the video. You need to share these thoughts and feelings and have people see your face.