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Please Critique My First Project!
Posted: Thu Jan 09, 2014 11:34 pm
by Brg1990
Leave a message for the next generation! Take a Photo or record a Video! Your message will be delivered to the future!
This project is not created for the famous and rich people. This is for all people on the earth.
Check This Out Now!
http://kck.st/1ghShnYIf u like it, please share it! Thank you!
Re: Please Critique My First Project!
Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2014 8:57 pm
by sbriggman
Would read your campaign copywrite out loud. Lots of grammar/formatting errors I caught. Also, in the copywrite, I don't believe you have a breakdown of how funds will be used.
Re: Please Critique My First Project!
Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2014 5:09 pm
by Brg1990
Thank You!
Re: Please Critique My First Project!
Posted: Sat Jan 11, 2014 11:13 pm
by sbriggman
Yea definitely. Be sure to "kick it forward" and leave some feedback on other people's campaigns on this forum or answer questions.
Re: Please Critique My First Project!
Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 11:58 pm
by whereyat504
I don't quite understand the logistics of this. How will you delver the canisters to the Mariana Trench/Everest? Something more specific in your write up would be helpful, as would a clearer breakdown of the need for 100K. I would also heed sbriggman's advice to proofread and edit your page. It makes your pitch look unprofessional and likely makes potential funders question your attention to detail.