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What do you guys think about my graphic novel
Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 4:46 am
by grecos11
Hello guys I just started my kickstarter campaign yesterday. My very first one, I would like to receive a feedback on the project and kickstarter video.
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/65 ... t-of-ender
Re: What do you guys think about my graphic novel
Posted: Tue May 27, 2014 1:09 am
by therriaultk
Hey! I took a look at your Kickstarter page, and this looks like an interesting project that you've put a lot of time and effort into. I liked how you narrated your video and showed some of the work and design going into the project and characters. I felt that at some points there was a lot going on though (graphic novel, audiobook, stretch goals, subtitles), and I thought that your pitch could seem a bit simpler. The diagrams on your page are also a lot, and some of the font is really small. How have things been going so far?
Re: What do you guys think about my graphic novel
Posted: Tue May 27, 2014 1:15 am
by grecos11
hi thank you for the quick repply, I have been changing things to improve the quality, i will make some corrections based in your comments, the project is doing good but not as good as I would like, 24 % in 4 days , it would be nice if you could share it too n.n