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Fantasy adventure movie - Launched but looking for critique

Posted: Tue May 20, 2014 12:44 am
by thebeastofverantcity
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/17 ... erant-city

That's my link. We also have a website, a FaceBook, Tumblr, and Twitter.

http://www.thebeastofverantcity.com/

I feel like we have all the pieces together for a good campaign but for some reason it's just been really hard raising funds here.

What do you guys think? What would you change about our campaign? I'm willing to do anything to make things better. We only have 2 weeks to raise $5600 now.

Thank you.

Re: Fantasy adventure movie - Launched but looking for criti

Posted: Thu May 22, 2014 3:03 pm
by sbriggman
Hmm... what kind of video play completions are you getting?

Re: Fantasy adventure movie - Launched but looking for criti

Posted: Fri May 23, 2014 4:38 am
by grecos11
from my personal point of view you gave a lot of details on the story, i think you should tease a little more and give curiosity to your audience.