I would second the suggestion about the audio.
If to do it you re-record the video for the speaking parts I would stand up straighter and keep your shoulders down to show more confidence!
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(btw I tend to do the same exact thing you do with your shoulders in the video!)
Also those transitions in the beginning where it breaks into checkerboards are a little jarring.
Overall it's a cool business idea.
But you might know that before watching the video my first impression was that you are a surveillance company - your logo is black and white, and it's composition is reminiscent of a military or government seal or insignia. Also crows are more associated with scavenging and being intelligent and cunning than say, wedding videos -
Just my two cents. best of luck!!
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