by JayRM » Fri Aug 08, 2014 10:54 pm
Hey thereisaman. I just took a look at your campaign. On the product side, it seems like a tough sell. First you're looking for backers who are interested in poetry, but you're also looking for backers that might be interested in meditation. Not only that, you're going against the concept of meditation. Is that the intent? Have you discussed your concept with others in this area?
For the video, or videos, I wish you had combined the two. Part of the reason why I watch videos is so I don't have to read. hah.. I think it would be better if you mixed some of your thoughts with you on camera in the main video along with what you have now, Also, I like how you included your back story in the content, and I can see how the term "thought chasing" might be captivating. The meditative spin on poetry might be interesting as a method to come up with poetry, but I would down play the meditation aspect of it, if that makes any sense. Meditative poetry seems like a marketing term that could be used, where actual meditation is not used. So I would remove the "There is no better spiritual guide than you!"