by Charles » Mon Aug 04, 2014 5:09 pm
The $5 pledge level is a good level, I think. It's use of "all of the above" incorporated with it sounds fine and dandy, but all that portion of that pledge level is is a thank you note. It isn't a critical issue, just something that caught my eye.
Your project page is lacking in visual energy. This is a band. You don't have to have art, to create visual energy, to engage the page visitor in a visual manner. Use photographs to achieve the same effect. You can kill two birds with one stone, if you do, by using photographs to break the large mass of text into pieces, That way, the text becomes more inviting, and less intimidating, to read.