by intellops » Thu Sep 18, 2014 1:19 am
Here's the problem that you must fix right away on your Kickstarter project: there are numerous spelling mistakes, punctuation mistakes and word usage errors in your project's description. This makes your entire project look unprofessional and, therefore, somewhat untrustworthy. I don't mean to insult you, but it appears that the project's description was not written by someone with a strong command of the English language. In the first sentence alone, there are five mistakes: three are punctuation, one is incorrect capitalization and one is spelling. And it doesn't get any better after that.
Here is what to do: ask a well-educated native English speaker to edit the entire description, then update your project immediately with those changes.