Sure, I can give you some comments. First impressions, you've got a lot of information on the campaign page and it seems to answer the majority of questions a potential backer would have.
The problem is you're selling skincare, so people need to know more about you and what you've done in the past to guarantee it'll be safe.
So I'd suggest more information on your background, what products you've launched in the past (and how much you made last year?).
Also the graphics could do with updating, perhaps get a better graphic designer and use clear headings so people know what section they're in when they see your campaign page.
If you need any further advice, feel free to get in touch.
Perbete wrote:Thanks for sharing great tips!
Today is our first day on Kickstarter, friends and families are 100% super supporters for funding.
We didn't team up with other similar project for promotion, maybe that's something important we were missing.
Any promotion suggestions for our project?
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