Hi,
Video ChangesSaid I was happy (ish) with the Video and by the time I had written my list of changes, I had virtually trashed it!!
It is not quite back to the drawing board - but some sections do need a re-shoot and we need to get the message clearer (and snappier).
Having said that it has given me a starting point from which to write the words for the page - it's indicated where I need to explain more, expand and capitalise on the video!
Good copywriting can be really time-consuming so wish me luck,
Cheers,
Andy