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Brg1990 · by **Brg1990** » Thu Jan 09, 2014 11:34 pm

Leave a message for the next generation! Take a Photo or record a Video! Your message will be delivered to the future!

This project is not created for the famous and rich people. This is for all people on the earth.

Check This Out Now!

http://kck.st/1ghShnY

If u like it, please share it! Thank you!

sbriggman · by **sbriggman** » Fri Jan 10, 2014 8:57 pm

Would read your campaign copywrite out loud. Lots of grammar/formatting errors I caught. Also, in the copywrite, I don't believe you have a breakdown of how funds will be used.

Brg1990 · by **Brg1990** » Sat Jan 11, 2014 5:09 pm

Thank You!

sbriggman · by **sbriggman** » Sat Jan 11, 2014 11:13 pm

Yea definitely. Be sure to "kick it forward" and leave some feedback on other people's campaigns on this forum or answer questions.

whereyat504 · by **whereyat504** » Sun Jan 19, 2014 11:58 pm

I don't quite understand the logistics of this. How will you delver the canisters to the Mariana Trench/Everest? Something more specific in your write up would be helpful, as would a clearer breakdown of the need for 100K. I would also heed sbriggman's advice to proofread and edit your page. It makes your pitch look unprofessional and likely makes potential funders question your attention to detail.

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