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The spacing between one paragraph to another is too wide. You can actually see the gap between them including the pictures.

Your product pictures is..rather too 2002. Its 2016 now. Make it black and stylish if you have to. Sunshine and filters will always do the job. Its the hipster era bro,

Overall, your product need more improvement. The only good thing I read from it is : They have serial numbers for each of them. For $175, we can buy a decent watch from well known companies.

Why should we go with your product? There is no value in it.

DESIGN : Its time to be more stylish. You see how Patek got owned by more recent design. I am being honest, the problem might not be your campaign presentation, but its the product itself.

What size emil list do you have? How are you doing pre-launch marketing?

lowkey wrote:The spacing between one paragraph to another is too wide. You can actually see the gap between them including the pictures.

Your product pictures is..rather too 2002. Its 2016 now. Make it black and stylish if you have to. Sunshine and filters will always do the job. Its the hipster era bro,

Overall, your product need more improvement. The only good thing I read from it is : They have serial numbers for each of them. For $175, we can buy a decent watch from well known companies.

Why should we go with your product? There is no value in it.

DESIGN : Its time to be more stylish. You see how Patek got owned by more recent design. I am being honest, the problem might not be your campaign presentation, but its the product itself.

Hi ,
Thanks for your feedback on the page. I appreciate your opinion about the design but good visual design is subjective. We have got a lot of good responses from friends and potential buyers. What watch from well known companies can you get for $175? Is it made of high quality materials?

sbriggman wrote:What size emil list do you have? How are you doing pre-launch marketing?

Hi,
Almost 5,000. We plan to use Crowdfunding PR once our goal has been reached. We are confident we will reach it really quickly.

I actually thought you launched months ago Congrats on getting 5000 emails and Crowdfunding PR.
- Been in touch with any influencers in the watch niche? I've a quick guide on the Top 100 Crowdfunding Influencers: http://www.linkedin.com/pulse/100-crowd ... giles-dawe

I also worked on the Sasqwatch Watch campaign to get it fully funded so would like to connect and work with you on yours.

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Regarding feedback on your page, I ran it through our checker - it's fine. Are you sure you should be under Fashion, rather than Jewelry?

What stood out to me on your page was the images. Some looked too photoshopped, whilst others weren't great quality and looked stretched. At the top you've a big gradient circle, not sure why people would want to see that...I'd replace that with a bunch of "featured in" graphics instead.

Best of luck with the launch!

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