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Ok, thanks for the feedback!

Falyon wrote:Ok, thanks for the feedback!

you're welcome

Thanks Greg, liked your page. Board Seat is a great idea- especially for startups or individuals working alone.

We just launched on Kickstarter and like most of us here...to feelings of excitement and apprehension!

We wanted to create something to impact climate change. So we combined nature and technology to create a revolutionary fabric. Then we made a t-shirt. The Greenest Tee on the Planet.

The Greenest Tee feels like cotton but performs like polyester meaning you can wear it all year round

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/thegreenesttee/the-greenest-t-shirt-on-the-planet

2 billion t-shirts are sold each year, for our future they need to be planet friendly.

Thanks Greg.

Amazing Greg, +200 projects backed.
We just launched on Kickstarter, start n grill, We want to create something eco friendly and chemical free like our way of mind.
Have a great day.

[url]https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1592787370/start-ngrill-the-only-automatic-ignition-charcoal/url]

startngrill wrote:Amazing Greg, +200 projects backed.
We just launched on Kickstarter, start n grill, We want to create something eco friendly and chemical free like our way of mind.
Have a great day.

[url]https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1592787370/start-ngrill-the-only-automatic-ignition-charcoal/url]

Hi Guys, looks like a nice product and congrats on the patent. Also, the location is Miami...not that it's an issue, but out of curiosity, sounds like some of your accents are from France while the main person (glasses) sounds like Quebec

1) Video: 2:25 to 3:10...you could've put this features section lower in the page in order to shorten the viewing time..and in fact, you did just that. So why repeat?. 3:29 to 3:43 was unnecessary. Overall, I like the video

2) There is a lot of text at the beginning of your page. Best to minimize text early on

3) Integrated products graphic is not legible, too small

4) This is a specific product and well designed to be in home & garden type of media (magazines, TV, etc). Did you do press outreach?

cheers and good luck

Hi Greg,
I liked your page. Thanks for taking time like this - what a process all these connections are!!

I've essentially got a month to get a really cool kids' communication tool off the ground. Never run a KS campaign before; super stressful, exciting, consuming.

We've gotten backed and tweeted by Carnie Wilson recently https://twitter.com/CarnieWilson/status ... 6096240640, which was awesome. But need much more traction.

Any feedback helps!! Thanks Greg.
Our project: http://kck.st/1QPsMw8

Thanks you Greg for these great advises.

Yes you are right i'm french and the main person is from Quebec but we all live in Miami.

I change the text, we will cut the video today and the press release will start tuesday (i know a little late).
This is our first fundraising and it start very slowly, a little bite of disappointment from us. With hope after the press release we will start our flight.

Thanks you again

katSR wrote:Hi Greg,
I liked your page. Thanks for taking time like this - what a process all these connections are!!

I've essentially got a month to get a really cool kids' communication tool off the ground. Never run a KS campaign before; super stressful, exciting, consuming.

We've gotten backed and tweeted by Carnie Wilson recently https://twitter.com/CarnieWilson/status ... 6096240640, which was awesome. But need much more traction.

Any feedback helps!! Thanks Greg.
Our project: http://kck.st/1QPsMw8

Hi,

Honestly, in this case you should look at successful campaigns for playing cards:
https://www.kickstarter.com/discover/advanced?category_id=273&sort=most_funded&seed=2411654&page=1

I did a search on KS for 'playing cards' most funded, in case you haven't

I like your page, lots of images.

Perks;

1) I think there is too much text in your perks
2) I think your strategy for perks is off. See "BRAND DECK" campaign in Kickstarter. You should simply sell the deck of cards in 1 pack, 2 pack, 4 pack. Further, you should show a discount: limit quantity for first 50 decks at $30 (example), then next 100 at $35, etc. Then only 2 other perks: a $5 thank you perk (don't send anything, just for people who want to support the kid thing) and a "limited edition" more expensive single deck (limit to 5 or so) where the creators will sign every card...or something like that

cheers and good luck. If not successful for whatever reason, do it again but with a $5k goal

I had like your Fbook
If u interesting We are started our 3D Short Film Project "Verge - Last Touch"
This is a short 3d animation film about a woman (Sarah), who has been founded strange evil amulet. Later, Sarah get strange super power.
Who is love animation projects, and original story. Support our project.
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1492907769/the-verge-thriller-3d-short-film?ref=category_newest
Thanks for support.!

Slayter80 wrote:I had like your Fbook
If u interesting We are started our 3D Short Film Project "Verge - Last Touch"
This is a short 3d animation film about a woman (Sarah), who has been founded strange evil amulet. Later, Sarah get strange super power.
Who is love animation projects, and original story. Support our project.
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1492907769/the-verge-thriller-3d-short-film?ref=category_newest
Thanks for support.!

Hi Slayter, some comments...

1) video: first 15 seconds is a waste, you don't need it. You can simply start with your opening scene. Also, all your text is very small and hard to read on the video. 00:15 to 1:25 is a long time just to see a piece of the film with the same character. Then you have a blank screen from 01:25 to 01:36..dead air. Not good. This in fact happens a few times in the video.02:56 to 03:33 is a waste...slow, screen credits. You should have the line about this being a true story as the very first thing your video starts with...it is the most captivating line. Also, we didn't get to see or hear from any of the creators

2) don't think you had any initial outreach...$0 so far means you didn't get any friends of family involved

3) 50 day or more campaign..very long

4) your last 2 perks ships only to Switzerland...why?

cheers an good luck