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Hi all,

I'm launching a cooperative board game about experimentation and getting things badly wrong next week and while I've been fairly active on the facebook Kickstarter Best Practices group I've not really sought advice about the preview link in other places - so I was wondering if I could share it here and get some suggestions about how to improve it:

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/82 ... n=a11d025e

I'm specifically interested in the order of the sections and whether including the playtester video is a good idea or not, but I'm open to suggestions in any area except the main video (It's too late in the day to make serious changes to that)