by lmatute » Fri Aug 30, 2013 12:24 am
Kris,
I will check it out as soon as i get a chance, but i can tell you that a quick look around, and it looks much better...
the very first sentence "We run a comprehensive online racing league based on Gran Turismo" made a whole lot of a different to me as soon as I read it.
As far as the video goes, I can tell you it doesn't take much But I understand what you are saying, the video to me was the hardest part... however just as a reference, the video on my project was shoot with my Galaxy S3, =) and I edited myself using iMovie on my old fashioned 2008 macbook. it really doesn't take much, but establishing a connection with backers is very important.
Grab a couple of testimonials from people that are regular at your league and post it, make sure it is tight to a name. This way people can relate.
I'll take some more time to read it again, and I'll post back.
Leo