1.Product is good enough for some people but not for everyone.
2. I don't understand from your video how it defined that it was an apple.
3. It will be better if you will show that green subtitles on your phone. One more thing. English is not your native language as it seems to me. So may be you should better hire a native speaker to make a voice record.
and may be you could give me a piece of advice about my launching video:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6l_ViUrTSYAnyway thank you and good luck!