Ready to Launch but is there anything else....
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    iamjera
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    Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by iamjera » Thu Apr 03, 2014 10:25 am

    Hi Everyone,

    We are ready to launch soon and just wanted to get some feed back from this awesome crowd about our project.

    Appnificent Eclipse

    We are good to go but some comments (positive and negative) would surely go along way so that we can improve the page. We want to make sure that the message is delivered a cross to our supporters and audience.

    Do let us know your thoughts. I'm sure I'm at the right place to get some good and constructive feedback. :D :D


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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by David Mc Donnell » Thu Apr 03, 2014 10:31 am

    WOW, the campaign looks amazing :).
    The only thing i can suggest is that you back some other project, shows your really part of the community #TeamPlayer
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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by iamjera » Fri Apr 04, 2014 4:04 am

    @David Thanks for the feedback. We will definitely do that and of course back other projects. Thanks for the taking the time to view the project. We actually are thinking of launching it later on. So would appreciate the support or maybe even sharing it for us. Thanks.
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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by sbriggman » Fri Apr 04, 2014 7:22 pm

    Very cool. One bit of feedback, I may just have missed it, but I didn't see where you said the funds would go or what they would go towards (a lot do a pie chart breakdown)? Essentially why do you guys need Kickstarter instead of just launching it on your own?
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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by iamjera » Sat Apr 05, 2014 6:34 pm

    Hi, thanks for the feedback and Im sure you took some time to read our project. Appreciate it. We need the funding for tooling so that we could get the product out to the market. It is a important information that we should let our backers and audience know. A pie chart it is.... :) thanks so much.
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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by jungaworld » Sun Apr 06, 2014 5:52 am

    Just read the whole page. The constructive criticism I have to offer is actually really similar to the feedback on my page- I'm still not sure exactly what the product is- is it software, is it a tablet, and what make it different can all the other tablets that have wifi. I know my grandmother has a picture player that I thought you could send wifi pics to but I'm not sure. Maybe if the beg of the story was something like-
    A Revolutionary New Digital Photoplayer: The Next Generation of Photo Albums.... (and they even upload the pics themselves) or something like that?
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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by blinklums » Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:25 pm

    i am also ready to launch ...so what do u think about mine.... https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/13 ... n=a96ebbf0
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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by jungaworld » Mon Apr 07, 2014 7:25 am

    same as what I told the person above. The first paragraph needs to be super simple:Get ready to throw out those clunky lamps, burned out bulbs, and {something else here} The future of lighting is Blinklums, flexible, sleek and long lasting." Also check your grammar and typos before you launch:)
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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by blinklums » Tue Apr 08, 2014 8:09 am

    thank for the tip and how about the video and others parts... more feedback will help
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    Re: Ready to Launch but is there anything else....

    by sbriggman » Tue Apr 08, 2014 7:19 pm

    @blinklums woah. interesting product. My main questions after watching the video:

    - How long does the battery last?
    - It's cool, but what would I use this for? What do you see people using it for mainly?
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