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I posted the last link on the wrong place so I apologize for any repeat exposure. I am looking for advice on the effectiveness of our message and the rewards in our project. We manufacture a new product that every driver can use to save money, self diagnose issues (no mechanical acumen required) and help the environment.

I appreciate your time in looking and hope you will follow our project and share your thoughts. We have done well over the past year and a half to get this far, but we know the copycats will be upon us and can hurt us if we have not established ourselves as the household name.

Thank you!

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ms ... n=0ec0e22d

We are also planning a giveaway on our build on 1. http://www.pitchfuse.com/ and recommend it to others. Just look for the QuickTrick Project.

Definitely think the campaign is much better structured than your last. Is 30k the lowest amount you can ask for? Don't see anywhere in the campaign text where you say where the money will go. I may have missed it in the campaign text?

eeeppp..thats why we need the feedback.. thanks .. we will get that up there.. we figured manufacturing and rewards will run about 25k and then the rest is the fees on both ends.. Will revise to show that

Done.. Thank goodness I have an excellent CFO to check my percentages.. Updated with budget items and adjusted total.

Thanks S

I have a few things...

1. Can you create some graphic headers to break up the text? It looks overwhelming to see so much text in a row to read!

2. For $145 are you actually getting a "prototype" or the first product off the assembly line. To me, "prototype" means a not-yet-finished version. I'd consider changing the wording here

3. $65 for a t shirt and decal seems really high. Studies show that most backers come in at $25-$75. Can you get something that your audience will really love for $50 or less?

Thanks jenny we will make some updates based on your feedback

Hi Jenny.. We just finished some updates. What do you think?
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