by janecui11 » Wed Mar 05, 2014 4:38 pm
I commented on the kickstarter page, but I'll just post it here again:
Hi there. I saw your post on CrowdfundingPR and I wanted to say something. I want to be honest as possible.
I really like the concept of the watches. But I got bored of your video in 30 seconds. The beginning of your video doesn't really tell me about yourself. You should describe yourself, first because we want to know about YOU.
Also, you could record the process of making the watch. Filming the beach makes me feel bored. It has nothing to do with your project.
Maybe create a 10 dollar reward for the people who want to help you, but don't want the keychain.
I really like your project. It's a great idea. I think it could be a big success if you improve the page.