by giftsandcoupons » Wed Apr 15, 2015 4:27 am
Hi, I saw this and no one else commented so I took time out and looked at your campaign and video.
Probably first thing I'd say is that you've got the passion there, it seems to be a project you *need* to work but the video and text comes across as somewhat desperate which is always going to put people off.
2nd thing is that you've got too much information going on. Perhaps some sketches would help in colour of the worlds/characters involved.
You remind me a bit of Kevin Smith which should appeal to people who like his movies/tv series but you ultimately need focus. Make it more clear what you'll be providing (UU sounds like W too) and what you'll expect in return.
I like the idea of tiers like $10, $20, $50, $100 only too. Good luck with it!