Video Feedback
  • RhysHagan
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    Video Feedback

    by RhysHagan » Tue Sep 20, 2016 5:57 am

    Hi all!

    I'm new to Kickstarter and created a video through Biteable which I think is pretty good.

    I need some feedback though, and I thought this would be the perfect place to ask.

    Do you belive that this video will help my campaign?

    You can check out the video on my campaign page:
    https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/11016802/hunting-taylor-brown-the-novel

    Cheers!
    Rhys


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    Author of Hunting Taylor Brown
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    Re: Video Feedback

    by sbriggman » Sat Sep 24, 2016 7:51 pm

    I have some general video tips that I think could help. I'll link up the YouTube vid down below.


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    Re: Video Feedback

    by New_CrowdFunder » Thu Sep 29, 2016 6:30 pm

    And how much help the video? Whether increasing donations through video?
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    Re: Video Feedback

    by hyperstarter » Fri Sep 30, 2016 1:06 pm

    Hi Rhys,

    Yes I think the video is a bit of a problem. For 40 seconds in there's no mention of your Kickstarter - it's personally about you (and we don't know you :) )

    From past 40 seconds, you wrote "But here's what you get.." why is there a "But"? From that point forward it felt like a charitable contribution, rather than funding your novel.

    In this age people don't have 40+ seconds to wait (think of mobiles etc.,), so you should of got to the point in the first 10 seconds, such as:
    - This is my novel
    - It's got X inside
    _ My background (+ awards) is...
    - I'm looking to raise X & give you X

    Then spend the rest of the time going into the campaign in detail.

    The campaign page needs alot of work too, but you wanted to focus on the video first. Best of luck.

    RhysHagan wrote:Hi all!

    I'm new to Kickstarter and created a video through Biteable which I think is pretty good.

    I need some feedback though, and I thought this would be the perfect place to ask.

    Do you belive that this video will help my campaign?

    You can check out the video on my campaign page:
    https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/11016802/hunting-taylor-brown-the-novel

    Cheers!
    Rhys
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    Re: Video Feedback

    by orfeo » Wed Nov 09, 2016 7:32 am

    Thxxxx sbriggman.

    The video is very useful.

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