Hi, happy to give a bit of feedback from the perceptive of a backer (for what it's worth).
Really impressive, clear video and I like the story about yourself (is that an Aussie accent?). You seems very genuine and trustworthy; perhaps be a little more exuberant/show excitement (I feel you come across a bit nervous, which is understandable!) but at the same time, speak a little more slowly and deliberately. I know that sounds strange but I think it works.
Without wanting to sound too harsh, I'll be honest. Whilst yours is a truly beautiful product, it basically seems the same as I could buy from Officeworks/Staples. I suggest highlighting THE ONE most important feature that you believe sets yours apart form every other planner out there.
I would also include a written guarantee in your reward descriptions that people will receive this by the end of Dec 2015, as this is when people will start a fresh for the year ahead and/or may want to ensure it is deliverable as a Christmas gift.
In the description, under About This Project, I am a fan of having a beautiful rewards infographic "above the fold"...so this is the first thing potential backers see.
I also feel that 24 is too many rewards; I know you are trying to cater to both the individual and corporate options, however it may mean that it makes it hard for people to decide. Look at this one for an example of simplicity; there is no room for procrastination...
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/12 ... nav_search All the best! Hope this has been of some help to you