spectrepaul wrote:Well I have tried my best and worked really hard to get more color into this kickstarter and added pictures of kids using the app with parent reviews.
You haven't even bothered to connect your personal Facebook page on the full bio section. Visually, the project page remains underwhelming. Your affinity for small images remains intact. The small KIds' SAcademy images, for example, should be swapped out for larger images, more vibrant ones. That one has a dull finish across most of it.
spectrepaul wrote:The video is new with a voiceover from my daughter and I don't think I could get it any better to be honest.
Really? A voiceover is an audio upgrade, not a video upgrade. The video is still wholly lacking in YOU discussing your project. It's better than nothing, but it isn't even remote near being couldn't be any better.
spectrepaul wrote:It is soo much different from when I originally pressed the publish button and I just wish I had done it like this in the first place! But that's too late now anyway.
It's not too late to keep improving your project page. Increase the number of images on it.
spectrepaul wrote:Fingers crossed for this final week I have left.
Hope you like the changes I have done, I have really tried to take on some of the advice you have given on here and I thank you for it.
Maybe I have tempted some of you to pledge??? Even just a £1 as it all helps
Anyway hope you can help and spread the word. Thanks again for your help.
You've got eight days to make it happen. Whether the half measures that you have taken will suffice or not, time will tell one way or another. The Kicktraq data for your project is pointing towards 38% of goal, from your current 27% of goal. You may get a boost, at the very end - but, it would help you enormously to close half the remaining funding gap between now and the last day or two.
Add the additional video somewhere on the page:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ouoDDez ... r_embeddedYour new photos show kids with a tablet, but it doesn't show them and the Paint Pot, at the same time. Have you no video clips that show kids playing with it? Have something show kids, their eyes and intensity and interest, their comments as they use it. You are missing out on a ton of potential interest generation, simply due to what you are failing to include on your project page.
Add a bunch of different paintable images, in both black and white and in versions colored by kids. Your project page remains visually underpowered, in its current incarnation. Grab a camera, and start taking pictures. My experience has been that for every hundred photos that you take, you might be lucky enough to obtain one really good image.
Kickstarter is a visual medium. It rewards visual energy, visual impact, and visual interest.