by hyperstarter » Fri Aug 17, 2018 11:21 pm
Not sure, if you're expecting comments - so I'll give them anyway having worked on the overfunded NOSO journal and Sketchynotebook...
At first glance the images on the page look a bit too neat, looks a bit photoshopped and might put others off if they think your note book isn't real or not.
The top titles of Why is it... + Examples don't explain what it is you're doing. Sure, the notes underneath do, but they're long and you've big blocks of text which are unreadable.
Other than being made of wood (you should list the benefits, if it's recycled etc.,, heavy and so on) + the phone app connection, what else can it do - if you can list the features better, also mention on the page where you've been featured already and perhaps some background on yourself (If you've won any design awards etc.,)...this will help build up trust issues.
Hope this helps and if you need any further advice, feel free to get in touch.