by sbriggman » Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:42 pm
First of all, I really like your product. If I was going to buy a new suitcase, I would totally get one of these. They would also be a great company perk for salespeople or businessmen that travel a lot.
I was kind of confused when I read the title and the "smart bag" description. When I saw the image, I totally got it and it made me want to watch the video. I also didn't understand the bluetooth trackable tag part in the description.
If I were you, I would skip the marketing buzz words, and do your best to describe the product as simply and in as few words as possible - charge your devices on the go with a suitcase that has a built in battery pack. The reason I say this is I think there is a strong enough problem/solution fit here and that if people could quickly grasp what the product was, they would immediately recognize whether or not they have that problem when traveling and whether or not they need one.
The other factor is the price. Have you gotten any feedback on this?
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