Feedback request
  • anasttin
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    Feedback request

    by anasttin » Wed Jun 10, 2015 4:09 am

    A friend and I have an awesome idea that we've just launched on kickstarter.

    We'd love to hear what people think and would even love a helping hand with some backing.

    Thanks and here's the link:

    https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/11 ... fitness-ga

    Have fun everyone!


  • Cam Connor
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    Re: Feedback request

    by Cam Connor » Thu Jun 11, 2015 7:07 am

    Anasttin, it looks like you've got a cool project there, but no video? I'd recommend adding one, where you speak genuinely and authentically about the project, what it offers, and why you need help, and how you plan to allocate your resources.

    Best of luck, :)
    -Cam
    Focused Crowdfunding Copywriter - Looking For Great Projects To Get Behind
  • ModernCoalition
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    Re: Feedback request

    by ModernCoalition » Thu Jun 11, 2015 9:06 pm

    Really like the idea behind this! I'd provide some information about A) what actually transpires in the world of the game and B) what stage of development you're in now and your plans for the future.
    Looks great though!
  • kelly101
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    Re: Feedback request

    by kelly101 » Fri Jun 12, 2015 4:52 pm

    I agree with the above:

    You need a video - there is way to much text for someone to read.

    So here is what I think the app does.

    1: You are represented by a avatar in the game
    2: Your movement is tracked during excercise/ daily - the number of steps you take are reflected by the distance the Avatar travels in his world.
    3: The game is not Virtual reality, in that you don't need a VR helmet and that no immersion occurs.
    Is this correct?
    If it is then the actual initial idea is quite nice, a game that tracks your movement.
    However the fact that your wearing a VR headset in the photo and its called VRfplayfit makes me think you actually get fit whilst wearing the headset. Its very confusing!

    Can you describe yourself, what skills do you have to make the product work.

    Hope the feedback helps

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