by hyperstarter » Sat Jan 09, 2016 4:28 am
Hi, you've got 26 days left so that's good!
My suggestion is rethink your page completely.
The huge chunks of text are unreadable, there's no images, there's no main title why you've the best cards.
I get the title meaning (from the Jack Black song) but alot of people won't. I think it needs to come across as being more serious, less jokey and a focus on what you're offering exactly.
Images are really important, you need them in the main body text of your page. High quality and perhaps seeing the cards in action.
Then a paragraph or two about how you made them, the materials used, the quality and so on...it really helps in order to gain backers trust.
Good luck with it!