by foralltoplay » Fri Apr 18, 2014 8:55 pm
Some feedback on the video: If you have the resources to do so, I would recommend re-recording the second half where you are talking into the camera. The video starts out fine, but once you cut to that section the production quality takes a nosedive. Would you be able to borrow or rent a widescreen, HD video camera to re-record that part? It would probably improve your chances of getting funded.
Good luck!