1. I think you could offer more rewards - you say a copy of the film. Is that digital or physical? What about an online screening of the film for a lower tier?
2. I think you could be clearer about what the money will go towards in the text below the video (what is the breakdown?). Could you include a pie chart?
3. Have you reached out to any local film communities about the project? I'm usually compelled to support films from people I don't know when I love the trailer (which is how actual movies are sold also I suppose). Didn't feel this way when I watched the video (just providing feedback, not saying you shouldn't make it! I support your effort
). Considering the amount you are trying to raise, your energy might be better spent by reaching out to your local community and selling the concept.