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Hi everyone,

We are brand new to the world of Kickstarter, and we just launched our first campaign this past Friday.

We're a Canadian based personal care (skin care, hair care etc.) manufacturer and our line we're trying to get funding for is our new Tea tree line.
It's a line where we've infused Tea Tree Oil in several skin care products, allowing people all over to test them and see for themselves the benefits of this "magical oil".
The list of products we came up with and have been working on are:
* Tea Tree Body Butter - Using our incredible Body Butter formula
* Tea Tree Body Wash
* Tea Tree Body Scrub
* Tea Tree Face Wash
* Tea Tree Face Mask
* Tea Tree Facial Toner
* Tea Tree Foot Lotion
* Tea Tree Foot Deodorant Spray
* Tea Tree Foot Wash
  As of now, we have been able to create functional samples of all the items and have been able to even come up with designs and manufacturing processes.

We need the funds now to push stability testing, to perfect manufacturing techniques to make sure that when we push through an order or production run of thousands of units at a time, all will be the same. We need to run a few final production tests to make sure that the final product will be consistent and meet our ridiculously high standards.

Our Foot products (foot spray, lotion and wash) are the newer items in our bundle and they are a bit behind the rest. The labels have not been finished and the bottles to use have not been chosen yet. Within the next few months we will have finished designs, and product sample ready to follow the rest into stability testing before sample production begins.

You can check out our campaign here : https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/fi ... and-beyond

I would love any advice and would love to know what you guys think of our campaign and if you have any tips on how to get more attention.

TIA!

Hi, I've ben giving advice on this forum for a while now - I wanted to turn around your question, what do you think is wrong with the campaign?

Right now it looks closer to a powerpoint presentation than a Kickstarter page.

Wish you success with your campaign. I, myself, am working on preparing the first campaign of yourtutor.us on indiegogo early next year.