sbriggman wrote:I think the most likely people to donate to this campaign would be in your local community, unless you can think of some rewards that might pull strangers into the project in some way aside from a t-shirt/mention.
Charles wrote:Over all, the project page is substantially lacking in visual appeal elements. The video aside, your photos are few, and they aren't particularly bright and colorful. So, for visitors who scroll and browse before reading, you offer precious little in the way of visual bait to catch their eye.
Charles wrote:I understand the mom angle. I think that pretty much anybody will "get that." But, I don't think that it will make much difference to your attempt to gather funding - at least, not in your project page's current incarnation.
Charles wrote:As I sit and just scroll the page up and down, looking to see what actually grabs my eye, there's just not a lot there. Yet, your goal is thirty five grand.
Charles wrote:I don't begrudge you trying to fund the entire restoration in one fell swoop. I just think that, with what you have on display, that's going to end up being an awfully high mountain to climb.
Charles wrote:For the amount of time that you have allocated to having a draft page prior to launch, your project page has changed very little.
Charles wrote:Your video has a lot of your voice in it, but very little of you in it, if you know what I mean.
Charles wrote:Good luck with your Kickstarter, John!
dmullin wrote:That is a cool idea. I wish you luck with your kickstarter. Maybe I'll see you on the road in your truck someday?
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